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5/7/2005 9:29:05 AM
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I]it's called "I wanna know"
I Wanna Know
Verse 1
When I walk when I talk I think about you I can't get you off my mind yeahaaa i don't know what it is but it's something something sweet
Courus
So I wanna no do u feel the same as me do u love me do u care about me uhuhuhuh care about me cause I wanna know wanna know
Verse 2
it seems like everyday it's always about u in some way i just turn around and face the crowed and all I see is you
Reapeat courus
VerSE 3
When I see you around I run away cause i donno how you feel about me yeahaa it seems like everything is always you always you
REpeat courus
I donno what to do so tell me tell me tell me that you love me cause I think I'm inlove with you
plz tell me honest opinion i am just a beginer at composing songs [/FONT]
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I]it's called "I wanna know"
I Wanna Know
Verse 1
When I walk when I talk I think about you I can't get you off my mind yeahaaa i don't know what it is but it's something something sweet
Courus
So I wanna no do u feel the same as me do u love me do u care about me uhuhuhuh care about me cause I wanna know wanna know
Verse 2
it seems like everyday it's always about u in some way i just turn around and face the crowed and all I see is you
Reapeat courus
VerSE 3
When I see you around I run away cause i donno how you feel about me yeahaa it seems like everything is always you always you
REpeat courus
I donno what to do so tell me tell me tell me that you love me cause I think I'm inlove with you
plz tell me honest opinion i am just a beginer at composing songs [/FONT]
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5/10/2005 8:25:01 PM
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Hey,
I think its a cools song. Although I don't write songs, I think maybe if you put more lines into it it might be more interesting. And try adding a bridge. It might help.
Kat
I hope this helped.
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Hey,
I think its a cools song. Although I don't write songs, I think maybe if you put more lines into it it might be more interesting. And try adding a bridge. It might help.
Kat
I hope this helped.
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5/11/2005 7:04:58 PM
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I think I posted something already.... umm it's not up yet...I'll tell you again..if you see two of the same messages ignore it okay? I'm a beginner at song writing too...but I think you should like have more lines in it and maybe add a bridge. Otherwise its a great song with a good and one question what type of song is it?
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I think I posted something already.... umm it's not up yet...I'll tell you again..if you see two of the same messages ignore it okay? I'm a beginner at song writing too...but I think you should like have more lines in it and maybe add a bridge. Otherwise its a great song with a good and one question what type of song is it?
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5/12/2005 3:47:34 PM
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its pretty good i no its better then anythin i can do or my friend can do cuz my friend tried 2 make a song and dis is wat it turned out 2 be
corus:go home play with mama oops i mean your lama then a lil kid says y and from there on da song has swearing and sounds really bad
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its pretty good i no its better then anythin i can do or my friend can do cuz my friend tried 2 make a song and dis is wat it turned out 2 be
corus:go home play with mama oops i mean your lama then a lil kid says y and from there on da song has swearing and sounds really bad
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5/12/2005 9:15:05 PM
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I think its really good! You should add the third verse in with the 2nd and then add a brige to make it alittle longer.
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I think its really good! You should add the third verse in with the 2nd and then add a brige to make it alittle longer.
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5/14/2005 1:12:01 PM
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ok, no and i wouldn't put songs up on boards becuase theres no tune and it sucks!
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ok, no and i wouldn't put songs up on boards becuase theres no tune and it sucks!
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