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sargent_silly posted: 12/9/2007 12:18:25 PM
Mayday rank: 1165	Heres my short story. A long time ago there was a town that had a drout.The sun then called a cloud a mean name. The cloud then was really sad so the cloud started to cry.The town then had water forever.	Heres my short story. A long time ago there was a town that had a drout.The sun then called a cloud a mean name. The cloud then was really sad so the cloud started to cry.The town then had water forever.
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posted: 12/17/2007 9:29:57 AM
rank:	LOL I like it! Its funny. except the mean part I think this should be on crunch. Santa ED	LOL I like it! Its funny. except the mean part I think this should be on crunch. Santa ED
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sargent_silly posted: 12/18/2007 4:49:55 PM
Mayday rank: 1165	Thanks for your input electricdragon now wheres ajay...............	Thanks for your input electricdragon now wheres ajay...............
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posted: 1/2/2008 11:29:22 PM
rank:	i like but i thought their would be a happy ending like the cloud forms a secret allians and takes over the world and thus putting the human race to r.i.p muhahahaha yup their is a happy ending	i like but i thought their would be a happy ending like the cloud forms a secret allians and takes over the world and thus putting the human race to r.i.p muhahahaha yup their is a happy ending
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