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Yeah... maybe... They genetically experiment! Or something.
That could work. I've got the whole ending scene in my head, though. I want for the First Division to lose... so it can't be too strong. But then again...
Maybe a mission is to fight these mutants... super humans. Whatever! Yes! It just might work!
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Yeah... maybe... They genetically experiment! Or something.
That could work. I've got the whole ending scene in my head, though. I want for the First Division to lose... so it can't be too strong. But then again...
Maybe a mission is to fight these mutants... super humans. Whatever! Yes! It just might work!
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8/17/2005 10:20:47 PM
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Wait, wait. If this is a double post, sorry.
I kind of want the scene to be sudden. Or maybe, your scene could go after the betrayal.
I visualized: Some citizens are working in a field, and it's all happy. But then in another shot, you see a few 1st Division fighter 'planes' or single ships (still thinking in either Modern Warfare kind of fighters, or space types...)
And they fly in, and begin to shoot down the citizens and kill the soldiers. There's this awful scene of betrayal.
And then, your scene comes in. Going with:
On a dashboard... say, in the headquarters, on a large display screen, there is a map of the world. And in the green territories, they are flashing red, meaning under attack.
Leader 1's face appears in the display.
Leader 2: What is the meaning of this?
Then the whole scene. Mutation and stuff.
Leader 1: "Leader 2? You aren't needed anymore. For even thinking of joining the Rebels, you shall be arrested with the rest of them. Give order for your men to surrender.
Leader 2: Never! I guess this means war....
Okay... about the cat claws and stuff. That's a good idea. But I wasn't thinking that much. Maybe you can use that for your Area 51 book, or something. But then again... my idea... that sounds a bit like Halo. Super Soldiers. But then again, Halo wasn't all entirely original. But then again... uh oh. I'm getting to sound a bit like Kerry, there.
I'll be waiting for a reply. ^^
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Wait, wait. If this is a double post, sorry.
I kind of want the scene to be sudden. Or maybe, your scene could go after the betrayal.
I visualized: Some citizens are working in a field, and it's all happy. But then in another shot, you see a few 1st Division fighter 'planes' or single ships (still thinking in either Modern Warfare kind of fighters, or space types...)
And they fly in, and begin to shoot down the citizens and kill the soldiers. There's this awful scene of betrayal.
And then, your scene comes in. Going with:
On a dashboard... say, in the headquarters, on a large display screen, there is a map of the world. And in the green territories, they are flashing red, meaning under attack.
Leader 1's face appears in the display.
Leader 2: What is the meaning of this?
Then the whole scene. Mutation and stuff.
Leader 1: "Leader 2? You aren't needed anymore. For even thinking of joining the Rebels, you shall be arrested with the rest of them. Give order for your men to surrender.
Leader 2: Never! I guess this means war....
Okay... about the cat claws and stuff. That's a good idea. But I wasn't thinking that much. Maybe you can use that for your Area 51 book, or something. But then again... my idea... that sounds a bit like Halo. Super Soldiers. But then again, Halo wasn't all entirely original. But then again... uh oh. I'm getting to sound a bit like Kerry, there.
I'll be waiting for a reply. ^^
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8/18/2005 5:16:11 PM
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Well yeah the claws may have been a bit much lol.
It was kind of like Marvel's Wolverine super humans. lol.
Well I'll be gone for awhile. Camping ugh.
Anyways good luck with your game.
Oh and maybe you could describe the aliens for me. I'm just curious.
Talk to you on Monday (when I'll be back).
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Well yeah the claws may have been a bit much lol.
It was kind of like Marvel's Wolverine super humans. lol.
Well I'll be gone for awhile. Camping ugh.
Anyways good luck with your game.
Oh and maybe you could describe the aliens for me. I'm just curious.
Talk to you on Monday (when I'll be back).
With all due respect, jchansfan
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8/20/2005 6:02:49 PM
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what is the point of this wat so ever? sum sorta story so we can learn about politics or..i dunno but its really weird.
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what is the point of this wat so ever? sum sorta story so we can learn about politics or..i dunno but its really weird.
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8/21/2005 12:26:25 PM
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Yeah. It's weird. Because it's our little chat. I always find Jchansfan here, so, huzzah!
Anyway. We're creating things. He's a writer, and I'm trying to get creative...
(I thought the sign said 'Private discussion'
Anyway.
Right, Jchansfan. Don't laugh at me, because I didn't design these alien characters. Just the human forces... just not the ships.
Zeatorgs:
For this first one, its face is kind of like... a dog. Then moves down to the torso. There isn't much armour, because "They were meant to be first infantry. Faster in speed"
Think he called them: Anthorgs, maybe.
If you played Halo, the Covenant is a gathering of different races. I think my friend was trying to do the same... Or, I haven't seen enough of his units ^^
Whenever we play, he uses a huge unit: Skull Cruiser... or Carrier. Or something. A really weird ship.
I shall try to get back to you... perhaps with more answers to that question. If I can get a hold of that friend. Just to remind, this is 3050 CE.
As for the title, I was thinking: Conflict Earth: The Last Alliances.
But then again, I could do: 3050 'CE' (Conflict Earth, and CE) But I kinda liked the Last Alliances a little more. I even designed a banner, or something for it.
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Yeah. It's weird. Because it's our little chat. I always find Jchansfan here, so, huzzah!
Anyway. We're creating things. He's a writer, and I'm trying to get creative...
(I thought the sign said 'Private discussion'
Anyway.
Right, Jchansfan. Don't laugh at me, because I didn't design these alien characters. Just the human forces... just not the ships.
Zeatorgs:
For this first one, its face is kind of like... a dog. Then moves down to the torso. There isn't much armour, because "They were meant to be first infantry. Faster in speed"
Think he called them: Anthorgs, maybe.
If you played Halo, the Covenant is a gathering of different races. I think my friend was trying to do the same... Or, I haven't seen enough of his units ^^
Whenever we play, he uses a huge unit: Skull Cruiser... or Carrier. Or something. A really weird ship.
I shall try to get back to you... perhaps with more answers to that question. If I can get a hold of that friend. Just to remind, this is 3050 CE.
As for the title, I was thinking: Conflict Earth: The Last Alliances.
But then again, I could do: 3050 'CE' (Conflict Earth, and CE) But I kinda liked the Last Alliances a little more. I even designed a banner, or something for it.
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8/22/2005 2:52:55 PM
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...Anyway, Jchansfan, it's odd. By the time you read this, I will be the one away on a camping trip.
So... I'm leaving tomorrow.
I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
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...Anyway, Jchansfan, it's odd. By the time you read this, I will be the one away on a camping trip.
So... I'm leaving tomorrow.
I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
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8/23/2005 6:04:20 PM
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We have fun camping (I hoipe you enjoy it more than I do, othewrwise you most likely won't have fun lol.
Earth Conflict: Last Alliances does have a ring to it.
That or you could call it: Destructive Era: Last Alliances.
I like the word Era lol.
Hmmm... the aliens sound kinda creepy.
So in the end is the UEA capput?
Acuelly I'm writing a book set in the future. My bad guys aren't aliens though.
So the Zertalogs are one alien race?
I await your return,
With all due respect, jchansfan
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We have fun camping (I hoipe you enjoy it more than I do, othewrwise you most likely won't have fun lol.
Earth Conflict: Last Alliances does have a ring to it.
That or you could call it: Destructive Era: Last Alliances.
I like the word Era lol.
Hmmm... the aliens sound kinda creepy.
So in the end is the UEA capput?
Acuelly I'm writing a book set in the future. My bad guys aren't aliens though.
So the Zertalogs are one alien race?
I await your return,
With all due respect, jchansfan
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8/27/2005 7:33:37 PM
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Uh... not exactly caput, the UEA. There is one more force... or... maybe yeah. The organization is gone, I guess. There's the last surviving division.
And, there are the Absentse, and the Rebel forces left.
Yeah... Birch Bay was all right, I guess. Clams, oysters... ^^
Conflict Earth... I didn't want to make it sound exactly like the show, Earth, Final Conflict.
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Uh... not exactly caput, the UEA. There is one more force... or... maybe yeah. The organization is gone, I guess. There's the last surviving division.
And, there are the Absentse, and the Rebel forces left.
Yeah... Birch Bay was all right, I guess. Clams, oysters... ^^
Conflict Earth... I didn't want to make it sound exactly like the show, Earth, Final Conflict.
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9/17/2005 1:22:07 PM
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I've never heard of the show Earth: Final Conflict.
Well conflict Erath sounds like a neat name for a game.
Oh I though the rebels all died.
So you're 13? Well you make a very convincing 15-16 year old lol.
Well anyways how is your video game plot line coming along?
My stories coming along good.
Speaking of stories, Burner's right you are an amazing writer. I was reading that Phillus Blackmore story in the Fanfic and stories board.
Oh and does that Red v.s. Blue showe you were talking about does it have participation of Microsoft or is it an unathorized show?
With all due respect, jchansfan
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I've never heard of the show Earth: Final Conflict.
Well conflict Erath sounds like a neat name for a game.
Oh I though the rebels all died.
So you're 13? Well you make a very convincing 15-16 year old lol.
Well anyways how is your video game plot line coming along?
My stories coming along good.
Speaking of stories, Burner's right you are an amazing writer. I was reading that Phillus Blackmore story in the Fanfic and stories board.
Oh and does that Red v.s. Blue showe you were talking about does it have participation of Microsoft or is it an unathorized show?
With all due respect, jchansfan
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9/17/2005 4:18:58 PM
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Sorry for my intrusion into your private discussion but I can answer that one. Red vs Blue is an authorized Halo web series. Although it is authorized, Microsoft has no participation in Red vs Blue whatsoever. A company/group called "Rooster Teeth" created it.
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Sorry for my intrusion into your private discussion but I can answer that one. Red vs Blue is an authorized Halo web series. Although it is authorized, Microsoft has no participation in Red vs Blue whatsoever. A company/group called "Rooster Teeth" created it.
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Yeah. Conflict Earth. Nice ring to it, if I do say so myself. Currently, it's standing still. I don't really have time to think about it anymore. If I do have time, I spend it trying to squeeze those precious hours into playing Halo.
Lol, actually, people often mistake me as an older person the way I type... like on MSN and stuff. You know how people do the whole chatspeak smilie movement on IM and all that? Yeah, I'm kinda against that. On MSN I type with proper grammar, no smilies (except for ^^) but... Yeah.
So you were reading that thing, eh? Well, I'm not too great at writing... But you should see this one fellow I know. He's quite an interesting character.... quite interesting indeed. Anyway, he's a remarkable writer. One of the best on the Halo section of fanfiction. We talk occasionally... That might explain why I type properly. It's influencial.
About Red vs Blue... I think they do have an agreement of some sort with Bungie. That's why if someone wanted to create another webseries like RvB, they'd need the creators (Rooster Teeth)'s permission.
Actually, I was writing a script for a webseries that was in the process. A spinoff of Red vs Blue called: Green vs Blue. It kinda died before we got to start, but I'm going to revive the story again ^^
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Yeah. Conflict Earth. Nice ring to it, if I do say so myself. Currently, it's standing still. I don't really have time to think about it anymore. If I do have time, I spend it trying to squeeze those precious hours into playing Halo.
Lol, actually, people often mistake me as an older person the way I type... like on MSN and stuff. You know how people do the whole chatspeak smilie movement on IM and all that? Yeah, I'm kinda against that. On MSN I type with proper grammar, no smilies (except for ^^) but... Yeah.
So you were reading that thing, eh? Well, I'm not too great at writing... But you should see this one fellow I know. He's quite an interesting character.... quite interesting indeed. Anyway, he's a remarkable writer. One of the best on the Halo section of fanfiction. We talk occasionally... That might explain why I type properly. It's influencial.
About Red vs Blue... I think they do have an agreement of some sort with Bungie. That's why if someone wanted to create another webseries like RvB, they'd need the creators (Rooster Teeth)'s permission.
Actually, I was writing a script for a webseries that was in the process. A spinoff of Red vs Blue called: Green vs Blue. It kinda died before we got to start, but I'm going to revive the story again ^^
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I've got it! Okay... For the 'reason' why the 3rd division left, was because they disagreed with 2nd Division's methods. Like, they were creating Super soldiers. Like, with DNA of a captured alien, the subject contains boosted strength, sight, and most of the 'traits' of the aliens'. Plus, with a bit of biogenetical improvements as well....
And the 3rd Division didn't approve, and left the UEA... Thus, joining the Rebels forces.
Lol. Here's a far out thought into the future. This game of mine could become a 'three part game'... So, this one is an RTS game. The next could be a FPS, and the third could be an RPG! So, it takes place all over the place.
Like, number 2: They actually defended Earth, but now, they are staging an assault on the Zeatorg motherworld. This is where first person comes in. It basically re-enacts D-Day, but with Sci-Fi. So, these little ships, they fly into this little field, or something. And then the ship is designed so the troops hop out from the back. And then they all charge in, or something...
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I've got it! Okay... For the 'reason' why the 3rd division left, was because they disagreed with 2nd Division's methods. Like, they were creating Super soldiers. Like, with DNA of a captured alien, the subject contains boosted strength, sight, and most of the 'traits' of the aliens'. Plus, with a bit of biogenetical improvements as well....
And the 3rd Division didn't approve, and left the UEA... Thus, joining the Rebels forces.
Lol. Here's a far out thought into the future. This game of mine could become a 'three part game'... So, this one is an RTS game. The next could be a FPS, and the third could be an RPG! So, it takes place all over the place.
Like, number 2: They actually defended Earth, but now, they are staging an assault on the Zeatorg motherworld. This is where first person comes in. It basically re-enacts D-Day, but with Sci-Fi. So, these little ships, they fly into this little field, or something. And then the ship is designed so the troops hop out from the back. And then they all charge in, or something...
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Padon the intrusion...again. Ya, I know about that, Sharpshooter. I found it on google a few weeks ago. Check out the bottom board, you should see a post from me. I'm the 'Guest'. Its the top post.
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Padon the intrusion...again. Ya, I know about that, Sharpshooter. I found it on google a few weeks ago. Check out the bottom board, you should see a post from me. I'm the 'Guest'. Its the top post.
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Browse what? So...
Anyway, yes. I found out Conflict Earth is already being used as: Mayday: Conflict Earth... Ah well. Back to the drawing board, I guess.
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Browse what? So...
Anyway, yes. I found out Conflict Earth is already being used as: Mayday: Conflict Earth... Ah well. Back to the drawing board, I guess.
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9/20/2005 5:34:52 PM
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Oh too bad about the name.
feel free to use the Era of Conflict suggestion of mine.
I thought it was division one who was creating super soldiers. Wasn't that the reson the UEA had the civil war?
Oh and what is an RTS?
Burner- You lost me! By the way awnsering to comment you made about my lack of signature in that one post moicking people in school, Yeah I didn't really bother because she wasn't respecting others.
MODS- please post.
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Oh too bad about the name.
feel free to use the Era of Conflict suggestion of mine.
I thought it was division one who was creating super soldiers. Wasn't that the reson the UEA had the civil war?
Oh and what is an RTS?
Burner- You lost me! By the way awnsering to comment you made about my lack of signature in that one post moicking people in school, Yeah I didn't really bother because she wasn't respecting others.
MODS- please post.
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That last post was about the Green vs Blue forums. I guess I should have mentioned it.
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That last post was about the Green vs Blue forums. I guess I should have mentioned it.
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Ah! Whatever, Jchansfan. All you have to know is that one of the Divisions is creating Super Soldiers... That's why there was betrayal. Yes.
And... Sweet, Burner. You actually found it? But I don't actually think that's really it. Ours was just a phbb bulletin, or something along the lines of that. I don't think that shows up on google.
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Ah! Whatever, Jchansfan. All you have to know is that one of the Divisions is creating Super Soldiers... That's why there was betrayal. Yes.
And... Sweet, Burner. You actually found it? But I don't actually think that's really it. Ours was just a phbb bulletin, or something along the lines of that. I don't think that shows up on google.
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wow..thats some complex stuff... my head hurts..uh..what the hell are u guys talking about..i dont even wanna know or you'll confuse the stupid one some more
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wow..thats some complex stuff... my head hurts..uh..what the hell are u guys talking about..i dont even wanna know or you'll confuse the stupid one some more
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Sharpshooter & Burner- We're being swore at for conversing. By an 8 year old no less.
Zapper73- Have we offeneded you some how. I'm fourteen and I don't swear. So why should you be swearing at people for nothing.
Me and one of my very good Yap! friends, sharpshooter125(masterchief125) were talking about story potenials. Then one of his friends, Burner(Well I consider Burner my friend too) joined in our convsation. Does any of that offend you. If it confuses you don't read it.
We have a right to talk about video game and book plots and all that if we want.
Sharpshooter- Okay then so one division is creating super soldiers and that erupts into a civil war. Right?
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Sharpshooter & Burner- We're being swore at for conversing. By an 8 year old no less.
Zapper73- Have we offeneded you some how. I'm fourteen and I don't swear. So why should you be swearing at people for nothing.
Me and one of my very good Yap! friends, sharpshooter125(masterchief125) were talking about story potenials. Then one of his friends, Burner(Well I consider Burner my friend too) joined in our convsation. Does any of that offend you. If it confuses you don't read it.
We have a right to talk about video game and book plots and all that if we want.
Sharpshooter- Okay then so one division is creating super soldiers and that erupts into a civil war. Right?
With all due respect, jchansfan
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Err... I guess? Yeah. I'm not arguing with your Religion, regarding one of your swears. Then again, I'm Atheist. But, sure. Yes Zapper. If you've failed to read the sign, it's something only myself, Jchansfan and Burner would understand... (Great minds think alike. Lol. Nah. I just have a lot of time to kill, so my mind erupts and goes into its own little world. Hehe.)
And yeah. Civil War. I guess you can call it that. Either more of a Rebellion, or Civil War. Kinda like Gundam Seed. Zaft against the Earth forces, but these are all Earth forces. So, it is a Civil War, I'm assuming.
Lol, with the time to spare, I've thought of a weird intro/cutscene for a second game regarding 'Conflict Earth'... Jeez. If I'm not playing Halo, or fiddling around the net, it's probably writing stories or sitting down and thinking about stuff.
Zapper: I don't know if that was a compliment, or an insult. Either the complex part was insulting, or you were complimenting us on creativity. Bu-ut, if you're only 8, as Jchansfan has mentioned, you will not understand our gibberish. Or you can completely avoid this topic. Save your head. If you read anymore, "you could explode...."
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Err... I guess? Yeah. I'm not arguing with your Religion, regarding one of your swears. Then again, I'm Atheist. But, sure. Yes Zapper. If you've failed to read the sign, it's something only myself, Jchansfan and Burner would understand... (Great minds think alike. Lol. Nah. I just have a lot of time to kill, so my mind erupts and goes into its own little world. Hehe.)
And yeah. Civil War. I guess you can call it that. Either more of a Rebellion, or Civil War. Kinda like Gundam Seed. Zaft against the Earth forces, but these are all Earth forces. So, it is a Civil War, I'm assuming.
Lol, with the time to spare, I've thought of a weird intro/cutscene for a second game regarding 'Conflict Earth'... Jeez. If I'm not playing Halo, or fiddling around the net, it's probably writing stories or sitting down and thinking about stuff.
Zapper: I don't know if that was a compliment, or an insult. Either the complex part was insulting, or you were complimenting us on creativity. Bu-ut, if you're only 8, as Jchansfan has mentioned, you will not understand our gibberish. Or you can completely avoid this topic. Save your head. If you read anymore, "you could explode...."
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