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posted: 8/20/2011 10:21:29 PM
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In a far away universe, there is a planet much like ours It is called Duskal. There is water, land, and an atmosphere, and life on that planet. The water is quite

different from ours: Duskal can make more water if water is polluted and it easily cleans water if it runs out of more. The ozone layer can be patched up in a snap. Oxygen does not get polluted. It is a very clean and happy planet with no wars, fights, or Global Warming and stuff (although there are natural disasters like ours). But that all ended one day. A planet made of pure horror and evil which is called Minkop came closer to Duskal. Minkop has the most evil things there can possibly be. The most evil thing on THAT planet is a monster named MassiveMunch. MassiveMunch is a horrendous, huge, and terrible creature that looks like a large T-rex. He has large half-oval mouths, with large sharp teeth and claws. He has red, scary eyes that even just staring at his eyes can petrify you. He has a large, extremely spiky body from eating life from other planets, a poisonous tongue, and his whole body is powerful.




He has a few sidekicks as well. His right-hand man is not a man, and perhaps not a creature. He is a crazed Storm Cloud named Stormer. Stormer is always a black cloud, always has an evil grin on his face, with a spiky, golden, precious crown with jewels on it. He loves zapping everything cute and fluffy, and loves to use acid rain (acid that decays stuff) and blizzards that freeze you solid with one snowflake.




His other sidekick is a large, furry caterpillar named Mutant Caterpillar. He always wanted a better name when he was younger, so he destroyed his family and vowed revenge on everyone who stepped on him. He is now about the size of a rhino, loves to hypnotize and step on people, and gobbles people up and crushes them up during their journey inside him. Stay away from his little antenna things on his head: they can paralyze you for a year, and they can also rearrange your molecules so you become a helpless object.



MassiveMunch also has little buddy named MiniMunch. He is a much smaller, sneakier version of him. He loves playing pranks and biting the citzens of Minkop, even though they're evil too. He is about the size of a baby hippo. He got the idea for their team's name, which is called C.R.U.S.H. (Cruel Rude Underestimated Squad of Hurters)




Minkop wanted to destroy all life everywhere except for on Minkop. So they came closer to Duskal and launched an android that had MassiveMunch, his minions and his sidekicks in it. It seemed Duskal would come to an end... or not. See what happens in my next post. I'm not posting unless enough people comment!
In a far away universe, there is a planet much like ours It is called Duskal. There is water, land, and an atmosphere, and life on that planet. The water is quite

different from ours: Duskal can make more water if water is polluted and it easily cleans water if it runs out of more. The ozone layer can be patched up in a snap. Oxygen does not get polluted. It is a very clean and happy planet with no wars, fights, or Global Warming and stuff (although there are natural disasters like ours). But that all ended one day. A planet made of pure horror and evil which is called Minkop came closer to Duskal. Minkop has the most evil things there can possibly be. The most evil thing on THAT planet is a monster named MassiveMunch. MassiveMunch is a horrendous, huge, and terrible creature that looks like a large T-rex. He has large half-oval mouths, with large sharp teeth and claws. He has red, scary eyes that even just staring at his eyes can petrify you. He has a large, extremely spiky body from eating life from other planets, a poisonous tongue, and his whole body is powerful.




He has a few sidekicks as well. His right-hand man is not a man, and perhaps not a creature. He is a crazed Storm Cloud named Stormer. Stormer is always a black cloud, always has an evil grin on his face, with a spiky, golden, precious crown with jewels on it. He loves zapping everything cute and fluffy, and loves to use acid rain (acid that decays stuff) and blizzards that freeze you solid with one snowflake.




His other sidekick is a large, furry caterpillar named Mutant Caterpillar. He always wanted a better name when he was younger, so he destroyed his family and vowed revenge on everyone who stepped on him. He is now about the size of a rhino, loves to hypnotize and step on people, and gobbles people up and crushes them up during their journey inside him. Stay away from his little antenna things on his head: they can paralyze you for a year, and they can also rearrange your molecules so you become a helpless object.



MassiveMunch also has little buddy named MiniMunch. He is a much smaller, sneakier version of him. He loves playing pranks and biting the citzens of Minkop, even though they're evil too. He is about the size of a baby hippo. He got the idea for their team's name, which is called C.R.U.S.H. (Cruel Rude Underestimated Squad of Hurters)




Minkop wanted to destroy all life everywhere except for on Minkop. So they came closer to Duskal and launched an android that had MassiveMunch, his minions and his sidekicks in it. It seemed Duskal would come to an end... or not. See what happens in my next post. I'm not posting unless enough people comment!
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