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pokemongirl105
posted: 8/3/2011 7:30:27 PM
pokemongirl105 pokemongirl105 Schoolsout

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I would create the last character... but my other one was in Fall too XD I'll let someone else create a Fall buddy for my character :P I would create the last character... but my other one was in Fall too XD I'll let someone else create a Fall buddy for my character :P
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Xx13bluerosesxX
posted: 8/3/2011 10:00:17 PM
Xx13bluerosesxX Xx13bluerosesxX Suntan

rank: 371

Gwah, I can't remember why I like this colour so much. Maybe Mio is eating my memories... Sorry, that was a Crystal Chronicles reference. Anyways, I'll make the last character.

Name:
Aki DiFalonteh
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Good or bad: Good
Master of Which Season: Fall
Creature form: Lamia
Bio: She was a good girl, always doing what she was told and had a sense of right and wrong. When she found out about her ability to turn into a lamia, she was absolutely thrilled. When she was offered the choice to join the good side, she did. She is half Japanese and half Greek
Human appearance: Olive skin, gray-green eyes, copper brown hair with caramel high lights, 5'6", slim, tends to wear mini dresses over leggings and boots.
Creature appearance: It's kind of hard to describe. It's sort of like the lower part of her body is a red serpent-like tail and sharp fans attached onto her fore arms. I based it off of the lamiae in Crystal Chronicles.Tin Foil Hat
Personality: Tender, obedient, teasing and loyal.
L.I: Anyone
Skills: Gymnastics, bows and first-aid
Powers: Able to create whirlwinds and can vaguely hear the dead.
Anything else: Her weakness is in her personality. Can you figure it out? Froot
Gwah, I can't remember why I like this colour so much. Maybe Mio is eating my memories... Sorry, that was a Crystal Chronicles reference. Anyways, I'll make the last character.

Name:
Aki DiFalonteh
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Good or bad: Good
Master of Which Season: Fall
Creature form: Lamia
Bio: She was a good girl, always doing what she was told and had a sense of right and wrong. When she found out about her ability to turn into a lamia, she was absolutely thrilled. When she was offered the choice to join the good side, she did. She is half Japanese and half Greek
Human appearance: Olive skin, gray-green eyes, copper brown hair with caramel high lights, 5'6", slim, tends to wear mini dresses over leggings and boots.
Creature appearance: It's kind of hard to describe. It's sort of like the lower part of her body is a red serpent-like tail and sharp fans attached onto her fore arms. I based it off of the lamiae in Crystal Chronicles.Tin Foil Hat
Personality: Tender, obedient, teasing and loyal.
L.I: Anyone
Skills: Gymnastics, bows and first-aid
Powers: Able to create whirlwinds and can vaguely hear the dead.
Anything else: Her weakness is in her personality. Can you figure it out? Froot
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Promy
posted: 8/4/2011 5:23:34 PM
Promy Promy Schoolsout

rank: 5765

Sugar HighsmileSo I guess Sugar HighsmileSo I guess
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Promy
posted: 8/4/2011 5:37:34 PM
Promy Promy Schoolsout

rank: 5765

lol, failure @ my last post.

I was gonna say 'So I guess we just gotta wait for NomNom to come here to start the rpg'. :P
lol, failure @ my last post.

I was gonna say 'So I guess we just gotta wait for NomNom to come here to start the rpg'. :P
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nomfto
posted: 8/5/2011 5:00:46 PM
nomfto nomfto Sunshine

rank: 1881

So, it seems we're ready to start. :P
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Nyani scanned the area. Spotting a plump caribou, she started to lunge. She was about to make the killing blow when all of a sudden she became human, transforming without trying to. Falling to the ground, she blacked out when she landed.
When she woke up, she was lying in a bed in a hotel. Locked in, she tried to call for service. A man came with food.
"WHERE AM I?!" she screamed when he opened the door.
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It was the middle of the night. The foster mom woke Allegra up, and guided her to a car. She drove her to a hotel and then she was sent to a room.
~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~

Yeah, it's insanely short. But it's only the beginning. wink
So, it seems we're ready to start. :P
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Nyani scanned the area. Spotting a plump caribou, she started to lunge. She was about to make the killing blow when all of a sudden she became human, transforming without trying to. Falling to the ground, she blacked out when she landed.
When she woke up, she was lying in a bed in a hotel. Locked in, she tried to call for service. A man came with food.
"WHERE AM I?!" she screamed when he opened the door.
~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~
It was the middle of the night. The foster mom woke Allegra up, and guided her to a car. She drove her to a hotel and then she was sent to a room.
~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~.-~

Yeah, it's insanely short. But it's only the beginning. wink
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Xx13bluerosesxX
posted: 8/6/2011 11:47:22 AM
Xx13bluerosesxX Xx13bluerosesxX Suntan

rank: 371

Ha, I was going to post on my Dsi last night, but something weird happened. The reply box appeared, then disappeared. Odd.
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Malady wandered around. She hated being in the same place for more than a week. After all, life's too short and you never know. Besides, that phoenix's voice
kept nagging her and was driving her crazy. 'I told you that you shouldn't have stopped to buy candy.' the voice scolded her mentally.
'Shut it. My life, my rules.' Malady growled back at the voice. The voice didn't reply back, which startled her. Whenever she made disagreed with her phoenix, it would always make a sarcastic comment just to annoy her. Maybe this voice isn't phoenix's. Malady shivered at the thought.
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I'm too lazy to do Aki's beginning. Hurray for reading Fairy Tail.
bowrofl

Ha, I was going to post on my Dsi last night, but something weird happened. The reply box appeared, then disappeared. Odd.
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Malady wandered around. She hated being in the same place for more than a week. After all, life's too short and you never know. Besides, that phoenix's voice
kept nagging her and was driving her crazy. 'I told you that you shouldn't have stopped to buy candy.' the voice scolded her mentally.
'Shut it. My life, my rules.' Malady growled back at the voice. The voice didn't reply back, which startled her. Whenever she made disagreed with her phoenix, it would always make a sarcastic comment just to annoy her. Maybe this voice isn't phoenix's. Malady shivered at the thought.
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I'm too lazy to do Aki's beginning. Hurray for reading Fairy Tail.
bowrofl

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Promy
posted: 8/9/2011 12:15:01 PM
Promy Promy Schoolsout

rank: 5765

Sam Ramen was looking out the window of the taxicab he had hauled while at the airport. It was raining very harshly. The rain was just pelting on the window. But Sam liked it. He liked being kept in the bubble of his own thoughts sometimes. Something was nagging him. His right hand clenched over the paper he was holding. It was a letter addressed to him, telling him that he was invited to a 'special meeting' at a hotel. The letter said it was utmost important. Life-and-death kind of important. Inside it was a free plane ticket, so Sam's family packed him up and let him go with his Uncle Utomo, who was sitting right beside him in the backseats of the cab. If this was a prank, whatever. The least they could take from this excursion is a free vacation!

As the cab neared the hotel, Sam looked up. A storm was brewing up outside right now. A dash of a lightning bolt ripped through the air. As Sam and his uncle stepped out of the cab, Sam thought that this invitation to the hotel was no prank; that it was dead serious.

How very right he was.

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Hope what I wrote so far fits in with the story. Btw Nom, should the hotel have a name? And where is the story taking place so far?


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Sam Ramen was looking out the window of the taxicab he had hauled while at the airport. It was raining very harshly. The rain was just pelting on the window. But Sam liked it. He liked being kept in the bubble of his own thoughts sometimes. Something was nagging him. His right hand clenched over the paper he was holding. It was a letter addressed to him, telling him that he was invited to a 'special meeting' at a hotel. The letter said it was utmost important. Life-and-death kind of important. Inside it was a free plane ticket, so Sam's family packed him up and let him go with his Uncle Utomo, who was sitting right beside him in the backseats of the cab. If this was a prank, whatever. The least they could take from this excursion is a free vacation!

As the cab neared the hotel, Sam looked up. A storm was brewing up outside right now. A dash of a lightning bolt ripped through the air. As Sam and his uncle stepped out of the cab, Sam thought that this invitation to the hotel was no prank; that it was dead serious.

How very right he was.

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Hope what I wrote so far fits in with the story. Btw Nom, should the hotel have a name? And where is the story taking place so far?


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nom_stor
posted: 8/9/2011 6:15:45 PM
nom_stor nom_stor June Bug

rank: 19

awesome. great job promeh. welllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

the story is taking place in, lets say... a hotel in varadero, cuba. the name of the hotel is Hotel Allegro Varadero. It's a hotel i went to in cuba, btw. :P so theres like a meeting and all that when all of the people are there, and stuff happens. :P
awesome. great job promeh. welllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

the story is taking place in, lets say... a hotel in varadero, cuba. the name of the hotel is Hotel Allegro Varadero. It's a hotel i went to in cuba, btw. :P so theres like a meeting and all that when all of the people are there, and stuff happens. :P
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Xx13bluerosesxX
posted: 8/9/2011 9:30:44 PM
Xx13bluerosesxX Xx13bluerosesxX Suntan

rank: 371

Aki stared at the runway as the plane took off. She wasn't a big fan of heights, but she simply couldn't refuse this offer, and she simply couldn't refuse to sleep.
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When Aki awoke again, they were almost there. Probably a few minutes before they landed. She wondered why they invited her to Cuba. 'Maybe they know about my powers.' she thought. As the plane landed, she gathered what little belongings she had brought with her. She twirled her golden heart locket. As corny as it sounded, she kept a picture of her family in that locket. She hailed a taxi and loaded her bags in.
"Where do you want to go, miss?" the taxi driver asked her.
"The Hotel Allegro Varadero, please." she replied, peeking at her invitation to properly say the hotel's name.
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I can hardly say 'Hotel Allegro Varadero', much less spell it.

edited by Xx13bluerosesxX on 8/20/2011
Aki stared at the runway as the plane took off. She wasn't a big fan of heights, but she simply couldn't refuse this offer, and she simply couldn't refuse to sleep.
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When Aki awoke again, they were almost there. Probably a few minutes before they landed. She wondered why they invited her to Cuba. 'Maybe they know about my powers.' she thought. As the plane landed, she gathered what little belongings she had brought with her. She twirled her golden heart locket. As corny as it sounded, she kept a picture of her family in that locket. She hailed a taxi and loaded her bags in.
"Where do you want to go, miss?" the taxi driver asked her.
"The Hotel Allegro Varadero, please." she replied, peeking at her invitation to properly say the hotel's name.
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I can hardly say 'Hotel Allegro Varadero', much less spell it.

edited by Xx13bluerosesxX on 8/20/2011
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Promy
posted: 8/10/2011 12:30:13 PM
Promy Promy Schoolsout

rank: 5765

I have a question: Am I able to control the other characters that were made by other people without their permission? Is that possible? Or is it better to ask for permission to use someone else's character?

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I have a question: Am I able to control the other characters that were made by other people without their permission? Is that possible? Or is it better to ask for permission to use someone else's character?

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yoshimaniac
posted: 8/11/2011 9:04:37 PM
yoshimaniac yoshimaniac Sunflower

rank: 576

Question before I feel I can post!: Where are the villains at this point in time...? Is this whole story going to take place in Cuba (I've never been, nor have I seen any Cuban media... I wouldn't be able to write it...)?
I also have the same question as Promy... I would prefer no one control my characters for me, but I used to do that all the time here. XD

I want to write a Hikaru part, but I don't knows what's happening... Sorry... >.<
-Yoshi
Question before I feel I can post!: Where are the villains at this point in time...? Is this whole story going to take place in Cuba (I've never been, nor have I seen any Cuban media... I wouldn't be able to write it...)?
I also have the same question as Promy... I would prefer no one control my characters for me, but I used to do that all the time here. XD

I want to write a Hikaru part, but I don't knows what's happening... Sorry... >.<
-Yoshi
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nomfto
posted: 8/12/2011 7:32:25 AM
nomfto nomfto Sunshine

rank: 1881

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XD the story is only taking place in Cuba at the beginning, guys. And the villains..idk, they're living their life right now. Just wherever you want them to be.

Idk, I control the other characters a bit when I'm doing RPGs. But it's your choice, people will have to ask yoshi to control her character, so yeah.

Sorry for the confusion, guys.
Zcdcdsfdsfsdfdscsdsdfadscsawwadasd

XD the story is only taking place in Cuba at the beginning, guys. And the villains..idk, they're living their life right now. Just wherever you want them to be.

Idk, I control the other characters a bit when I'm doing RPGs. But it's your choice, people will have to ask yoshi to control her character, so yeah.

Sorry for the confusion, guys.
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pokemongirl105
posted: 8/29/2011 9:07:15 PM
pokemongirl105 pokemongirl105 Schoolsout

rank: 4128

You can control my charries smile i just need a start since i havent done this in so long... or mention my charries and have interaction between your own ones. that way i can start writing again lol You can control my charries smile i just need a start since i havent done this in so long... or mention my charries and have interaction between your own ones. that way i can start writing again lol
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mew105
posted: 9/10/2011 11:24:52 AM
mew105 mew105 Sunshower

rank: 139

13blue is it possible to have a good n evil relationship between Aki and Tatmor? 13blue is it possible to have a good n evil relationship between Aki and Tatmor?
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Xx13bluerosesxX
posted: 9/15/2011 3:24:24 PM
Xx13bluerosesxX Xx13bluerosesxX Suntan

rank: 371

Why not? That would add a whole lot more depth into the plot (in my opinion). But you can cover that, I'm really bad at stuff like that. Thumbs Down Why not? That would add a whole lot more depth into the plot (in my opinion). But you can cover that, I'm really bad at stuff like that. Thumbs Down
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mew105
posted: 9/17/2011 1:38:24 PM
mew105 mew105 Sunshower

rank: 139

Awesome. Well if you could make something so I can continue on with it, that would be great since I still need an entry for my charries. Awesome. Well if you could make something so I can continue on with it, that would be great since I still need an entry for my charries.
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nomfto
posted: 9/19/2011 4:09:39 PM
nomfto nomfto Sunshine

rank: 1881

Oh dear this topic died bad. D:
edited by ym_daisy on 9/19/2011
Oh dear this topic died bad. D:
edited by ym_daisy on 9/19/2011
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