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8/7/2009 1:05:34 PM
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cottoncandy1- Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it! 
Julez- lol, you think so? Maybe I could be an author!
As for publishing this... Actually, if you think this is great, then I wish you guys could see my considered, 'awesome' stuff. :'( To tell you the truth, Conner's Grove is kind of inspired by one of my other stories. Miles Apart and Conner's Grove are just mini projects that I've been working on; and have been giving much attention, too! :P But, publishing this into a saga would be sweet!
-Bitesega X'P
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cottoncandy1- Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it!
Julez- lol, you think so? Maybe I could be an author!
As for publishing this... Actually, if you think this is great, then I wish you guys could see my considered, 'awesome' stuff. :'( To tell you the truth, Conner's Grove is kind of inspired by one of my other stories. Miles Apart and Conner's Grove are just mini projects that I've been working on; and have been giving much attention, too! :P But, publishing this into a saga would be sweet!
-Bitesega X'P
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8/7/2009 9:19:08 PM
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Maybe you should start your own blog and write all your stories there 
I could be your editor XD (cuz I'm good at it)
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Maybe you should start your own blog and write all your stories there
I could be your editor XD (cuz I'm good at it)
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8/29/2009 1:18:48 AM
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Julez- Whoa, coincidentally, I was just thinking to start one up. But, I have nothing solid to work with. Ideas keep on shifting and such. :/ For now I think I'll focus on Conner's Grove and Miles Apart.
:O Yes, you must be my editor!
Oh, and you wrote something on another topic about coming up with plots but always getting writer's block; you never know!
-Bitesega XP
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Julez- Whoa, coincidentally, I was just thinking to start one up. But, I have nothing solid to work with. Ideas keep on shifting and such. :/ For now I think I'll focus on Conner's Grove and Miles Apart.
:O Yes, you must be my editor!
Oh, and you wrote something on another topic about coming up with plots but always getting writer's block; you never know!
-Bitesega XP
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10/21/2009 8:04:10 PM
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The problem with me being the editor is that they won't let us post personal information like my email or the name of your site. I can't think of a way for me to find your site. :/
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The problem with me being the editor is that they won't let us post personal information like my email or the name of your site. I can't think of a way for me to find your site. :/
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10/25/2009 4:23:21 PM
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Ah, you do have a point there, and I was actually considering to give you a potential username I would use if I were to ever create one. But, I haven't, yet. I don't know why, but I somehow reconsidered putting my other work online. I guess it's because they aren't finished yet, and it's not fair to other people who would want to read it, also. You know how slow I post! :P
But, I'm sure you could find me if I were to give you a username or something.
-Alice
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Ah, you do have a point there, and I was actually considering to give you a potential username I would use if I were to ever create one. But, I haven't, yet. I don't know why, but I somehow reconsidered putting my other work online. I guess it's because they aren't finished yet, and it's not fair to other people who would want to read it, also. You know how slow I post! :P
But, I'm sure you could find me if I were to give you a username or something.
-Alice
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10/25/2009 5:14:40 PM
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"Like I said before," Kari said in a smooth, taunting manner. "You pick up a thing or two when you're at the top."
Vincent's eyes began to change color, their honey glazed appearance turned darker into an intense orange which then formed into a burning color that could only be compared to that of an inferno. You feared for the upcoming events that were sure to be just as equally dangerous as Vincent's current state.
"You don't know what you're dealing with." He said, as a raging fire formed around them in an instant, wrapping them in unbearable temperatures. You felt burns forming on your right arm, and then quickly moved it away from potential harm. You looked up at Vincent, his eyes were still burning with whatever emotion he was feeling.
'WHAT IS GOING ON!?' you screamed inwardly, hoping to find a response from the closed doors in the chambers of your mind.
'OW!' was all you received; Rade and Kari's cry of pain made you widen your eyes.
'Sorry!' you said as you looked apologetically at Kari, who was clutching her head.
You stared at Vincent, fire was pouring out of his eyes as his feet lifted off of the ground. You gasped; you didn't know that he could fly!
As he shot up in the sky, the walls of fire rose with him, and a shape started to form behind him. It almost looked like a bird.
You felt your eyes widen. It wasn't just a bird.
It was a phoenix.
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Okay, I guess I should be begging for forgiveness, because I haven't posted more about this story in a LONG time! SORRY! Well, I hope you find this part quite satisfying, for those of you who have been checking in regularly and have given up.
Oh, and please excuse my incompetence; both for my rustiness and timing! :}
-Bitesega XP
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"Like I said before," Kari said in a smooth, taunting manner. "You pick up a thing or two when you're at the top."
Vincent's eyes began to change color, their honey glazed appearance turned darker into an intense orange which then formed into a burning color that could only be compared to that of an inferno. You feared for the upcoming events that were sure to be just as equally dangerous as Vincent's current state.
"You don't know what you're dealing with." He said, as a raging fire formed around them in an instant, wrapping them in unbearable temperatures. You felt burns forming on your right arm, and then quickly moved it away from potential harm. You looked up at Vincent, his eyes were still burning with whatever emotion he was feeling.
'WHAT IS GOING ON!?' you screamed inwardly, hoping to find a response from the closed doors in the chambers of your mind.
'OW!' was all you received; Rade and Kari's cry of pain made you widen your eyes.
'Sorry!' you said as you looked apologetically at Kari, who was clutching her head.
You stared at Vincent, fire was pouring out of his eyes as his feet lifted off of the ground. You gasped; you didn't know that he could fly!
As he shot up in the sky, the walls of fire rose with him, and a shape started to form behind him. It almost looked like a bird.
You felt your eyes widen. It wasn't just a bird.
It was a phoenix.
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Okay, I guess I should be begging for forgiveness, because I haven't posted more about this story in a LONG time! SORRY! Well, I hope you find this part quite satisfying, for those of you who have been checking in regularly and have given up.
Oh, and please excuse my incompetence; both for my rustiness and timing! :}
-Bitesega XP
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10/25/2009 5:24:35 PM
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Uh, sorry to the mods, again! Hehehe...
Julez,
I remember you telling me that you can think of plots pretty fast. Well, how about doing a collaboration with me? Y'know, just a little project to keep the creative ideas flowing. And who knows, maybe you'll get an idea for a story! Plus, it'll be challenging because, if we're both writing something, then the other person might have to create an entirely different plot to complement the story. The possibilities are practically endless.
This is just an idea.
Please reply back! :O
Oh, and I've done this sort of thing before, just so you know.
-Alice
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Uh, sorry to the mods, again! Hehehe...
Julez,
I remember you telling me that you can think of plots pretty fast. Well, how about doing a collaboration with me? Y'know, just a little project to keep the creative ideas flowing. And who knows, maybe you'll get an idea for a story! Plus, it'll be challenging because, if we're both writing something, then the other person might have to create an entirely different plot to complement the story. The possibilities are practically endless.
This is just an idea.
Please reply back! :O
Oh, and I've done this sort of thing before, just so you know.
-Alice
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10/25/2009 7:33:30 PM
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Good idea! I can't write much right now (procrastination is something hard to avoid with my homework), but I'm up for the challenge! I'll be on almost every day so feel free to inform me on any details.
In the meantime, I'll be practising my rusty attempts at creativity with Zeria and her RPG skillz (she's pretty good you know). I'll talk to you later!
Happy Halloween!
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Good idea! I can't write much right now (procrastination is something hard to avoid with my homework), but I'm up for the challenge! I'll be on almost every day so feel free to inform me on any details.
In the meantime, I'll be practising my rusty attempts at creativity with Zeria and her RPG skillz (she's pretty good you know). I'll talk to you later!
Happy Halloween!
JULMaster
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10/26/2009 9:49:01 AM
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Nice to know that you're on board! Maybe we could include Zeria if she's interested.
Happy early Halloween!
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Nice to know that you're on board! Maybe we could include Zeria if she's interested.
Happy early Halloween!
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10/27/2009 10:03:28 PM
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The heat was too intense. You had to close your eyes. But before you did, you saw the flames form a sphere around you. You panicked; what if Vincent can't control his power? You braced yourself.
There was a lifting sensation, and you could feel the wind in your face, fanning the now floating orb, creating an even hotter temperature. You could feel your brow begin to sweat.
'Where is he taking us?!' Kari asked, slightly panicked.
For once, you kept a cool head. 'To Base Omega.'
Within seconds of your answer, Vincent had descended and landed safely onto the ground; the dust parting ways in a sea of speckles of dirt.
When the dirt cloud diminished, you saw a peculiar sight.
The old, wooden fence framed the neat rows of apple trees that covered a vast amount of land. The dirt road that led your eyes up to a small shack near the middle of the property seemed uninviting. You could see that a sparse amount of trees crept onto the back of the property. They seemed to hold no undergrowth, for the mount of green you could see was little.
The battered, crooked sign with painted-on black letters read:
Conner's Grove
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The heat was too intense. You had to close your eyes. But before you did, you saw the flames form a sphere around you. You panicked; what if Vincent can't control his power? You braced yourself.
There was a lifting sensation, and you could feel the wind in your face, fanning the now floating orb, creating an even hotter temperature. You could feel your brow begin to sweat.
'Where is he taking us?!' Kari asked, slightly panicked.
For once, you kept a cool head. 'To Base Omega.'
Within seconds of your answer, Vincent had descended and landed safely onto the ground; the dust parting ways in a sea of speckles of dirt.
When the dirt cloud diminished, you saw a peculiar sight.
The old, wooden fence framed the neat rows of apple trees that covered a vast amount of land. The dirt road that led your eyes up to a small shack near the middle of the property seemed uninviting. You could see that a sparse amount of trees crept onto the back of the property. They seemed to hold no undergrowth, for the mount of green you could see was little.
The battered, crooked sign with painted-on black letters read:
Conner's Grove
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11/3/2009 6:01:43 PM
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I'm sorry to say, but I will have a hard time keeping up with the collab sometimes because I'm doing a couple of scripts for my friends' machinima (video game movies). I'm doing a script for each friend plus collab updates over top of our homework so it could get pretty hectic some days.
By the way, you're beginning the collab, not me. ;P
Ciao,
JULMaster
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I'm sorry to say, but I will have a hard time keeping up with the collab sometimes because I'm doing a couple of scripts for my friends' machinima (video game movies). I'm doing a script for each friend plus collab updates over top of our homework so it could get pretty hectic some days.
By the way, you're beginning the collab, not me. ;P
Ciao,
JULMaster
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11/3/2009 8:43:51 PM
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OMG, you're writing a script for a machinima?! I LOVE THE STUFF!
Ahem... anyways, I understand. I have demands on my end too, including a story that everyone demands I continue writing, yearbook introductions, and a script for a play that needs to win a festival (although, I'm not sure which...).
Yeah, I guess I'll start it! Heheh, but I'll have to start up another topic! :"P What do you want to call it? Y'know what, you think of the title and I'll start up the topic as well as the starting paragraphs. :P
Just trying to be fair here!
Oh, we could at least update every no and again. Meaning every month. :P Or A.S.A.P!
later alligator-in-a-tor?!
Bitesega XP
So confuzzled I don't even understand the word confused!
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OMG, you're writing a script for a machinima?! I LOVE THE STUFF!
Ahem... anyways, I understand. I have demands on my end too, including a story that everyone demands I continue writing, yearbook introductions, and a script for a play that needs to win a festival (although, I'm not sure which...).
Yeah, I guess I'll start it! Heheh, but I'll have to start up another topic! :"P What do you want to call it? Y'know what, you think of the title and I'll start up the topic as well as the starting paragraphs. :P
Just trying to be fair here!
Oh, we could at least update every no and again. Meaning every month. :P Or A.S.A.P!
later alligator-in-a-tor?!
Bitesega XP
So confuzzled I don't even understand the word confused!
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11/6/2009 10:03:01 PM
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Title: Amnesia
A young man/woman is nearly killed in a tragic accident. They wake up in the hospital and the nurse says they have anterograde amnesia. Every day he/she has to record what they did the previous day so that they can remember who they are. We can come up with some events to advance the plot later on :P
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Title: Amnesia
A young man/woman is nearly killed in a tragic accident. They wake up in the hospital and the nurse says they have anterograde amnesia. Every day he/she has to record what they did the previous day so that they can remember who they are. We can come up with some events to advance the plot later on :P
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3/26/2010 10:52:25 PM
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You didn't know what to think. This was a little anti-climactic... Then again, it's not like you were expecting a castle on an island surrounded by Griffons and Winged-Boars...
"So," you started, glancing down at your burnt arm, "Where do we go from here?" You nonchalantly rolled your sleeve down to hide it as you turned around to face the two.
What you saw was completely believable, but seriously inappropriate due to their poor timing.
Vincent had Kari in a choke-hold, his eyes ablaze.
There was no time for this!
Speed... the voice whispered before fading away; hopefully this time, for good. You suddenly felt weightless, unaffected by time. The scenery around you started to blur and in an instant you went about your work. You separated the two, and stood in between them, your nails protruding in a threatening manner toward them. Time finally caught up with you.
Kari was grasping at her neck, gasping for air.
Vincent's eyes were still scorching with fire. You watched as they simmered down and settled with an appearance of heated charcoal. He blinked and his old honey-glazed eyes were back. You let out a sigh of relief, but kept your stance firm, nonetheless- you weren't sure what was going to happen next.
Vincent shook his head as if to snap out of his phoenix transformation. He looked up at you, and then collapsed.
"VINCENT!" you yelled, turning around to look at Kari.
She was on the ground, too. OH, COME ON!
"KARI!" You gently shook her to check her responsiveness. Nothing. Vincent really had her good.
Hysteria must've caught up with you, because you started to laugh as fear entered your system in strong doses. What if the Crafter's were coming?
You clenched your fists, retrieving what was left of your sanity, and closed your eyes.
'Rade, we're here.'
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You didn't know what to think. This was a little anti-climactic... Then again, it's not like you were expecting a castle on an island surrounded by Griffons and Winged-Boars...
"So," you started, glancing down at your burnt arm, "Where do we go from here?" You nonchalantly rolled your sleeve down to hide it as you turned around to face the two.
What you saw was completely believable, but seriously inappropriate due to their poor timing.
Vincent had Kari in a choke-hold, his eyes ablaze.
There was no time for this!
Speed... the voice whispered before fading away; hopefully this time, for good. You suddenly felt weightless, unaffected by time. The scenery around you started to blur and in an instant you went about your work. You separated the two, and stood in between them, your nails protruding in a threatening manner toward them. Time finally caught up with you.
Kari was grasping at her neck, gasping for air.
Vincent's eyes were still scorching with fire. You watched as they simmered down and settled with an appearance of heated charcoal. He blinked and his old honey-glazed eyes were back. You let out a sigh of relief, but kept your stance firm, nonetheless- you weren't sure what was going to happen next.
Vincent shook his head as if to snap out of his phoenix transformation. He looked up at you, and then collapsed.
"VINCENT!" you yelled, turning around to look at Kari.
She was on the ground, too. OH, COME ON!
"KARI!" You gently shook her to check her responsiveness. Nothing. Vincent really had her good.
Hysteria must've caught up with you, because you started to laugh as fear entered your system in strong doses. What if the Crafter's were coming?
You clenched your fists, retrieving what was left of your sanity, and closed your eyes.
'Rade, we're here.'
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5/5/2010 7:45:26 PM
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Boy has it been a LONG time! I've missed this place. My last post was over a year ago  Well anyway I thought I'd pop in and say hi to my friend  Oh and btw my spelling has gotten better now too I guess that's what highschool does for you. Anyway I see that you have been doing A LOT of writing while I've been gone. I just want to apologize for my dissapearance. Anyway I'm thinking of getting a little more active on here now. It's been getting boring on the computer lately. All i do is talk to my friends. ANYWAY ;P I'm planning to reintroduce Hidden Legacy. I've updated alot of it. Though maybe I will wait until I have a few more chapters....Anyway expect me to post on here more. OMG Now i have to read all of your story again :S that's gunna take a while. I wasn't keeping up cuz I've been worried about my grades the past 2 semesters (I'm grade 9 this year). Anyway it's all good. and I'm getting straight A's I'm so happy
Well anyway I'm also taking English right now, so my grammar and punctuation is going to be alot better. I'll post again in a few days, hopefully your still active.
I'VE MISSED YOU YTV! AND ALL YOU MODERATORS OUT THERE!
Sincerely, Blastoise
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Boy has it been a LONG time! I've missed this place. My last post was over a year ago Well anyway I thought I'd pop in and say hi to my friend Oh and btw my spelling has gotten better now too I guess that's what highschool does for you. Anyway I see that you have been doing A LOT of writing while I've been gone. I just want to apologize for my dissapearance. Anyway I'm thinking of getting a little more active on here now. It's been getting boring on the computer lately. All i do is talk to my friends. ANYWAY ;P I'm planning to reintroduce Hidden Legacy. I've updated alot of it. Though maybe I will wait until I have a few more chapters....Anyway expect me to post on here more. OMG Now i have to read all of your story again :S that's gunna take a while. I wasn't keeping up cuz I've been worried about my grades the past 2 semesters (I'm grade 9 this year). Anyway it's all good. and I'm getting straight A's I'm so happy
Well anyway I'm also taking English right now, so my grammar and punctuation is going to be alot better. I'll post again in a few days, hopefully your still active.
I'VE MISSED YOU YTV! AND ALL YOU MODERATORS OUT THERE!
Sincerely, Blastoise
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5/5/2010 10:04:39 PM
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Hey Blast! Nice of you to drop by! I see your spelling has improved. ;P I would very much like for you to continue Hidden Legacy, seeing as I was looking forward to it before your sudden absence. Yup, I have English this semester too! Although I'm not learning a lot on grammar, punctuation and spelling...
Don't worry about grade nine; just think of it as a warm up. Hehehe... Only kidding! It's good that you're keeping your grades up. Better than my failure to exceed over an 85... -.-" How was exams? Unless if you go to an unsemestered school, then never mind!
As for reading Conner's Grove all over again... Good Luck! :P You don't have to if you're busy.
Welcome Back, Friend
-Alice XP
PS> Sry for not posting anything amazing lately... Yup, high school is the biggest bother on earth. Y'know, besides the economy :P (I know, bad joke!
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Hey Blast! Nice of you to drop by! I see your spelling has improved. ;P I would very much like for you to continue Hidden Legacy, seeing as I was looking forward to it before your sudden absence. Yup, I have English this semester too! Although I'm not learning a lot on grammar, punctuation and spelling...
Don't worry about grade nine; just think of it as a warm up. Hehehe... Only kidding! It's good that you're keeping your grades up. Better than my failure to exceed over an 85... -.-" How was exams? Unless if you go to an unsemestered school, then never mind!
As for reading Conner's Grove all over again... Good Luck! :P You don't have to if you're busy.
Welcome Back, Friend
-Alice XP
PS> Sry for not posting anything amazing lately... Yup, high school is the biggest bother on earth. Y'know, besides the economy :P (I know, bad joke!
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5/6/2010 5:50:07 PM
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BLASTOISE! OMG! it's been so long... i dont know if u remember me or not but i was helping u out in a topic in the Video Game section... not sure if it was the GBA one or the DS one... well it has been quite a while from that of course... well when i was in 10th grade and only went in the VG section of the boards ;D so welcome back lol
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BLASTOISE! OMG! it's been so long... i dont know if u remember me or not but i was helping u out in a topic in the Video Game section... not sure if it was the GBA one or the DS one... well it has been quite a while from that of course... well when i was in 10th grade and only went in the VG section of the boards ;D so welcome back lol
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5/8/2010 1:26:16 PM
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Yep I go to a semestered school exams were pretty easy last semester. and Pokemon of course i remember you how could I forget?
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Yep I go to a semestered school exams were pretty easy last semester. and Pokemon of course i remember you how could I forget?
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5/10/2010 6:20:57 PM
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im not really sure how u could forget ;D maybe because i wasnt as active and all... but im glad u still remember me sorry bout writing in the other topic basically a shorter version of my last post... i didnt think the post in here would have come :P lol just wait till u get to grade 11 ;D its harder to get good grades well it also depends on the school... :P
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im not really sure how u could forget ;D maybe because i wasnt as active and all... but im glad u still remember me sorry bout writing in the other topic basically a shorter version of my last post... i didnt think the post in here would have come :P lol just wait till u get to grade 11 ;D its harder to get good grades well it also depends on the school... :P
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5/15/2010 6:31:39 PM
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You woke up from a comfortable sleep to unfamiliar surroundings: a white room, clean bedsheets, warmth, and Rade staring down at you.
"Rade!" you said aloud as you leapt out from under the cozy covers to give him a hug, all signs of drowsiness lost. It was nice to actually talk to him in person.
"Nice to see you too!" he said just as enthusiastically while returning your hug.
Letting go, you noticed that his right foot had been bandaged.
Following the path of your stare, he answered, "Rough landing..."
"What happened?" you asked eagerly, but fretful all the same of his answer.
"When we arrived, all three of you were on the ground; you must've collapsed out of stress and exhaustion. We transferred each of you into a room and assessed your conditions; you have a first degree burn, some signs of sleep depreivation, but that's all. Oh, and you've been asleep ever since. "
You look down to your right arm and find that from your fore-arm to your palm is completely bound in gauze. The burn...
You laughed light-heartedly, shrugging off the fact that your burn ached. "Actually Rade, I was asking about your 'rough landing'."
"Oh," Rade laughed, understanding what you had really meant. "I was still unconscious when I reached Base Omega, so I guess I landed feet first instead of slamming onto the floor with my entire body..."
"Well, at least you're alright."
"Hardly... I have to use krutches for about two months... and training starts as soon as you get back from an assignment, accomplished or failed..."
You couldn't believe it. They still make you train, even when you're injured?! Hardcore stuff.
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You woke up from a comfortable sleep to unfamiliar surroundings: a white room, clean bedsheets, warmth, and Rade staring down at you.
"Rade!" you said aloud as you leapt out from under the cozy covers to give him a hug, all signs of drowsiness lost. It was nice to actually talk to him in person.
"Nice to see you too!" he said just as enthusiastically while returning your hug.
Letting go, you noticed that his right foot had been bandaged.
Following the path of your stare, he answered, "Rough landing..."
"What happened?" you asked eagerly, but fretful all the same of his answer.
"When we arrived, all three of you were on the ground; you must've collapsed out of stress and exhaustion. We transferred each of you into a room and assessed your conditions; you have a first degree burn, some signs of sleep depreivation, but that's all. Oh, and you've been asleep ever since. "
You look down to your right arm and find that from your fore-arm to your palm is completely bound in gauze. The burn...
You laughed light-heartedly, shrugging off the fact that your burn ached. "Actually Rade, I was asking about your 'rough landing'."
"Oh," Rade laughed, understanding what you had really meant. "I was still unconscious when I reached Base Omega, so I guess I landed feet first instead of slamming onto the floor with my entire body..."
"Well, at least you're alright."
"Hardly... I have to use krutches for about two months... and training starts as soon as you get back from an assignment, accomplished or failed..."
You couldn't believe it. They still make you train, even when you're injured?! Hardcore stuff.
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