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corus:go home play with mama oops i mean your lama then a lil kid says y and from there on da song has swearing and sounds really bad]]> Thu, 12 May 2005 15:47:34 GMT http://www.ytv.com/boards/topic79018-.aspx Wed, 11 May 2005 19:04:58 GMT http://www.ytv.com/boards/topic79018-.aspx
I think its a cools song. Although I don't write songs, I think maybe if you put more lines into it it might be more interesting. And try adding a bridge. It might help.

Kat

I hope this helped.]]> Tue, 10 May 2005 20:25:01 GMT http://www.ytv.com/boards/topic79018-.aspx I]it's called "I wanna know"
I Wanna Know

Verse 1

When I walk when I talk I think about you I can't get you off my mind yeahaaa i don't know what it is but it's something something sweet

Courus
So I wanna no do u feel the same as me do u love me do u care about me uhuhuhuh care about me cause I wanna know wanna know

Verse 2
it seems like everyday it's always about u in some way i just turn around and face the crowed and all I see is you
Reapeat courus

VerSE 3

When I see you around I run away cause i donno how you feel about me yeahaa it seems like everything is always you always you

REpeat courus

I donno what to do so tell me tell me tell me that you love me cause I think I'm inlove with you

plz tell me honest opinion i am just a beginer at composing songs [/FONT]]]> Sat, 07 May 2005 09:29:05 GMT